Some write with metaphor-
They fill volumes like dance halls,
engorged with the most beautiful patrons
in the quilled rich silks,
decadent and opaque in color,
encrusted with jewels of vibrant hues
to disguise the unsettling truth
of their grotesque and tasteless nature.
Some write of their recollections,
fun houses filled with wisps
and coarse stalks of memories
distorted,
exaggerated,
(and hidden)
to suit the author's liking.
Some write of feelings
using the chills brought by empathy
to run rivers of quick sand
through your eyes and into a soul
stunned by emotions
and ignorant of the lack of context
to give that quicksand support.
And I?
What is a thinker?
What is he? What is she?
Is a thinker this?
Was a thinker this?
Was a thinker obedient to these? Does he or she remain a slave to these creeds?
Is a thinker loyal to any one belief or ideal?
Is a thinker loyal to any of these ideals? Is a thinker loyal to any belief? Truly, what is a thinker?
In my humble opinion, there is no true answer to such a question.
For a thinker, in my belief, is anyone. Anyone that is not bound by any form of dogma.
Hear me as I say what I believe a thinker is.
A thinker is a free person.
A thinker is one who actively observes the world around them.
A thinker is one not bound by any rel
How Not to Tell a Story by MakingFunOfStuff, literature
Literature
How Not to Tell a Story
After being on DeviantArt for a few years now, I've noticed patterns in people's stories. Patterns, that I can't say I've ever seen until I started using the internet. I believe that's because these kind of patterns are thoroughly unprofessional. The pattern in short is this:
Character = victim
Plot = bad things happening to said victim
Maybe this sounds harsh. It's not if you understand that is ALL there is to these stories. They take any character, hurl them into a tragedy and that's it.
Let's get this straight: We do not know your character well enough to care about them yet. No matter how bloody and gutty their injuries are, no matter
i don't sleep anymore. or at least i don't think i do. it's one of those things i stopped keeping track of like the number of words that make my mother cry (cancer, lists). if i'm being honest, i stopped sleeping (maybe) around the time i started thinking in a series of parentheses.
because i don't sleep, my arteries demand too much air (oxygen, clean) from the space outside my window. i make my room my heart, cold. it fills with a wind only bricks can breathe, an ice only soil is willing to withstand. i am winter's soul.
the world becomes a different place when you stop noticing sound (mute, black and white film) and start noticing every m
The Maze
Divide reality from illusion
Forwards is backwards
Separate belief from redemption
Success is failure
Where shadow crosses light
The ground meets my face
I'm surrounded by lies
The truth is too far away
-
Hope is this-
...Virus
Faith is this-
Injustice...
Pain is this-
...Shameless
It's just another dead end / It's filled with emptiness
This is death's discontent / Resenting life's rhetorical existence
Fear is this-
...Shapeless
Chaos is this-
Feverish...
Peace is this-
...Blinded
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An infinite cycle mocks
Turn after turn
The timelessness cannot stop
As the same path is reborn
An unstable prisoner drowns
Lost inside my own e